Haunted©
~By Vidhi Dasani
Characters:
-Filangee
-Alex
-Ella: small sister
-Elena: big sister
-Alina
Ella was all set to have a sleepover at her
house. She was very excited!! She told
all her friends to come she also invited her sister to come.
The next day they came and had a lot of fun!
But then Alex had to leave, then filangee also left and later Alina also
left….Only Elena and Ella where still there they could not stop thinking why
they left if they agreed to have a sleepover in the first place and why would
they leave together did they have a plan??
But then it was time to go to bed.
Next morning:
They saw that Alina had her own YouTube channel
but she never told them about it a video she posted on her channel went
viral…in that video filangee was petting a baby wolf and Alex ran away after
seeing it.
‘‘They ditched us!!!’’Ella shouted
‘‘It’s ok Ella, we can do something more
adventures than that and believe me our YouTube channel will be way more
popular then theirs’’ Elena said
‘’Really? But what do we have to do to get
famous?’’ Ella said curiously
‘We will visit the white forest!!’ Elena said while
stammering
‘WHITE FOREST!! NO! WE CAN’T GO TO THE WHITE
FOREST!! WHO EVER WENT THERE DIDN’T RETURN!!!’ Ella shouted
‘That place is not haunted Ella it’s just a
stupid rumor! And if we go there and find out everything about that place we
will record everything and that video will go super viral!! I bet you!’ Elena
said
‘Ummm…ok’ Ella said
‘Tomorrow at 1 am then, see ya!!’ Elena said
excitedly
‘AM!! AT NIGHT!! NOOOO!!’ Ella shouted with
fear
‘It’s going to be okay Ella! Don’t worry!’ Elena
said while yawning
‘Ok good night then’ Ella said
…………………………………………………………………………………………………………
next day morning:
They woke up got freshened up and ate breakfast
went out to the garden and watered plants and then soon it was lunch time and
they had lunch then they went out for a walk by the time they came back it was
already 6:00 pm they came back to home and had some snacks and watched a bunch
of movies then they had dinner and time flew by…It was already 12:00 pm. They
talked about school gossip and it was 12:45 pm. They took their camera, phones
and 2 headlights……
And so… began the journey of
Haunted
It was very dark, they were wearing headlights…
Cold winds blew past them…..this is a perfect
set for a horror movie…they reached the depths of the white forest they stood
looking at the white house!!
The lamp was lit, the door was open the chair
was rocking at this time...
They however held their phones in their hands
and recorded it all!!
Suddenly footsteps were heard a
scary looking grandma came out! She came closer to them and said ‘YOU LOOK AT
THESE POINTED TEETH, they are FAKE!!’
Ella’s heart stopped beating for
a second but then it was back to normal finally…all of this is sooo scary she
thought.
The grandma continued saying
‘there is a dress up party going on inside ... would
you like to join, it will be fun’
Ella pulled Elena aside with
fear, ‘’ I am not going in there!!’’ she said
‘Ella look I bought my camera’
-Elena
‘Ok so what??!’-Ella
‘My camera will record
everything and then it will automatically post it on YouTube too so there is no
need to worry...ok??’ –Elena
‘Ok however you won’t listen to
me’ –Ella
Ella put a camera in her shirt’s
pocket and it started recording everything they went in the old white house…
‘Girls you came! Let me
introduce my friends to you’ said the grandma with a rather happy face.
‘Okay’ Ella and Elena said
‘Ohh…I didn’t even introduce
myself to you…I am Anderita’ Anderita said while feeling a bit stupid.
‘Hi Anderita! Nice to meet you! ’Ella
and Elena said in a rather surprised tone.
‘Now let me introduce my
friends. ‘said anderita.
They went inside the house and
saw 4 people...
‘Hi I am Billy’ said one.
‘Hello I am Marie ‘said another
‘Hey I am Sam’
‘Hi I am lily’
‘Hi guys I am Ella and she is Elena’
‘Come join us!!Let’s dance’ said
Sam.
‘Before that can we talk to u
guys please’ Elena said
‘Ok sure’ Sam said.
‘Is this forest haunted??I heard
this house was also haunted but it’s not’ asked Ella.
‘This jungle is haunted but not
this house’ said Billy.
‘So you guys never get scared or
what??’ Elena asked curiously.
‘Yes we used to get scared but
then one day we decided to know the reason behind this so we all friends went
to the white cave, we tried to reach the book of haunted but we couldn’t and we
even…’shhhhh’Marie interrupted.
Lilly was quite at once.
‘Take these bracelets, give one
to Ella and you keep one, these bracelets will guide you to the right way and
protect you’ Sam said
‘Okay, but what correct way???’ Elena
asked.
‘Exactly we are gonna leave now’
Ella said.
‘Leave??? You cannot leave the
white forest without saving it’ Sam said.
‘What!!!’Elena and Ella shouted.
‘These bracelets will guide you
to the right way when you go to the white cave’ said Sam.
‘How did this forest get haunted
in the first place???’ Ella asked.
‘Long……long…..ago this forest was very beautiful nothing was wrong with
this place but once
There were sightings of a huge monster in town. The people told the king
about this.
And the next day he commanded the troop of soldiers to come with him to
the white cave and decided to defeat the monster at once.
The king sent one of his soldiers inside the cave
The monster came out with a skeleton in his huge hands! It was the king’s
soldiers!!
Then the whole army started to shiver and hesitate. The people who carried
the king on the wooden chair also fell down unconscious. The king fell down too…
The king’s army had some of the strongest people but they also shivered
with fear.
The king cursed his army saying if you don't manage to defeat the monster then your souls will Haunt your family and the whole
town.’
The soldiers tried their best to defeat the monster but in vain…
The nearby lake was also filled with blood, now it’s called the blood lake’. Sam said
-The next morning-
They were set off to the white
cave…
They finally reached….the
bracelet guided them inside the cave. There was a huge skeleton, it was
the monster's.
The bracelet guided us to a huge
door. We had to open the door just like the bracelet guided us to.
We kicked hard on the door again
and again and it finally opened.
It was full of spider webs and
we could see the book of haunted it was on top of a million rocks!!
We had to kick the rocks, we
kicked the rocks and the bracelet fell of our hand and broke.
Not even one rock broke! Our legs
were bleeding rocks were stuck in them, we still tried and tried finally 3
rocks were left and we had to climb on them
We did it!! We got the book of
haunted!!
But then suddenly the skeleton
was alive!!! It caught Ella.
‘Leave her’ Elena shouted.
‘If I leave her then you have to
die!!’ the skeleton of the monster shouted.
Elena ran, she stood motionless
on the edge of the cliff.
She was willing to die to save
her sister’s life!
Ella kicked the skeleton in the
face and ran; she held Elena’s hand and pulled her. The skeleton was coming
nearer and nearer to Ella. Elena pushed Ella’s hand away and jumped into the
blood river the skeleton turned into ashes.
‘NOOOO!!!ELENA!!’ Ella shouted
----The end----
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