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Haunted© 
~By Vidhi Dasani









Characters:
-Filangee
-Alex
-Ella: small sister
-Elena: big sister
-Alina
Ella was all set to have a sleepover at her house. She was very excited!!  She told all her friends to come she also invited her sister to come.

The next day they came and had a lot of fun! But then Alex had to leave, then filangee also left and later Alina also left….Only Elena and Ella where still there they could not stop thinking why they left if they agreed to have a sleepover in the first place and why would they leave together did they have a plan??

But then it was time to go to bed.

Next morning:

They saw that Alina had her own YouTube channel but she never told them about it a video she posted on her channel went viral…in that video filangee was petting a baby wolf and Alex ran away after seeing it.

‘‘They ditched us!!!’’Ella shouted

‘‘It’s ok Ella, we can do something more adventures than that and believe me our YouTube channel will be way more popular then theirs’’ Elena said

‘’Really? But what do we have to do to get famous?’’ Ella said curiously

‘We will visit the white forest!!’ Elena said while stammering

‘WHITE FOREST!! NO! WE CAN’T GO TO THE WHITE FOREST!! WHO EVER WENT THERE DIDN’T RETURN!!!’ Ella shouted

‘That place is not haunted Ella it’s just a stupid rumor! And if we go there and find out everything about that place we will record everything and that video will go super viral!! I bet you!’ Elena said

‘Ummm…ok’ Ella said

‘Tomorrow at 1 am then, see ya!!’ Elena said excitedly

‘AM!! AT NIGHT!! NOOOO!!’ Ella shouted with fear

‘It’s going to be okay Ella! Don’t worry!’ Elena said while yawning

‘Ok good night then’ Ella said
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next day morning:
They woke up got freshened up and ate breakfast went out to the garden and watered plants and then soon it was lunch time and they had lunch then they went out for a walk by the time they came back it was already 6:00 pm they came back to home and had some snacks and watched a bunch of movies then they had dinner and time flew by…It was already 12:00 pm. They talked about school gossip and it was 12:45 pm. They took their camera, phones and 2 headlights……

And so… began the journey of
Haunted

It was very dark, they were wearing headlights…
Cold winds blew past them…..this is a perfect set for a horror movie…they reached the depths of the white forest they stood looking at the white house!!

The lamp was lit, the door was open the chair was rocking at this time...
They however held their phones in their hands and recorded it all!!

Suddenly footsteps were heard a scary looking grandma came out! She came closer to them and said ‘YOU LOOK AT THESE POINTED TEETH, they are FAKE!!’

Ella’s heart stopped beating for a second but then it was back to normal finally…all of this is sooo scary she thought.

The grandma continued saying ‘there is a dress up party going on inside ... would you like to join, it will be fun’

Ella pulled Elena aside with fear, ‘’ I am not going in there!!’’ she said

‘Ella look I bought my camera’ -Elena

‘Ok so what??!’-Ella

‘My camera will record everything and then it will automatically post it on YouTube too so there is no need to worry...ok??’ –Elena

‘Ok however you won’t listen to me’ –Ella

Ella put a camera in her shirt’s pocket and it started recording everything they went in the old white house…

‘Girls you came! Let me introduce my friends to you’ said the grandma with a rather happy face.

‘Okay’ Ella and Elena said

‘Ohh…I didn’t even introduce myself to you…I am Anderita’ Anderita said while feeling a bit stupid.

‘Hi Anderita! Nice to meet you! ’Ella and Elena said in a rather surprised tone.

‘Now let me introduce my friends. ‘said anderita.

They went inside the house and saw 4 people...

‘Hi I am Billy’ said one.

‘Hello I am Marie ‘said another

‘Hey I am Sam’

Hi I am lily’

‘Hi guys I am Ella and she is Elena’

‘Come join us!!Let’s dance’ said Sam.

‘Before that can we talk to u guys please’ Elena said

‘Ok sure’ Sam said.

‘Is this forest haunted??I heard this house was also haunted but it’s not’ asked Ella.

‘This jungle is haunted but not this house’ said Billy.

‘So you guys never get scared or what??’ Elena asked curiously.

‘Yes we used to get scared but then one day we decided to know the reason behind this so we all friends went to the white cave, we tried to reach the book of haunted but we couldn’t and we even…’shhhhh’Marie interrupted.
Lilly was quite at once.

‘Take these bracelets, give one to Ella and you keep one, these bracelets will guide you to the right way and protect you’ Sam said


‘Okay, but what correct way???’ Elena asked.

‘Exactly we are gonna leave now’ Ella said.

‘Leave??? You cannot leave the white forest without saving it’ Sam said.

‘What!!!’Elena and Ella shouted.

‘These bracelets will guide you to the right way when you go to the white cave’ said Sam.

‘How did this forest get haunted in the first place???’ Ella asked.

‘Long……long…..ago this forest was very beautiful nothing was wrong with this place but once
There were sightings of a huge monster in town. The people told the king about this.
And the next day he commanded the troop of soldiers to come with him to the white cave and decided to defeat the monster at once.
The king sent one of his soldiers inside the cave
The monster came out with a skeleton in his huge hands! It was the king’s soldiers!!
Then the whole army started to shiver and hesitate. The people who carried the king on the wooden chair also fell down unconscious. The king fell down too…
The king’s army had some of the strongest people but they also shivered with fear.
 The king cursed his army saying if you don't manage to defeat the monster then your souls will  Haunt your family and the whole town.’
The soldiers tried their best to defeat the monster but in vain…
The nearby lake was also filled with blood, now it’s called the blood lake’. Sam said

-The next morning-

They were set off to the white cave…

They finally reached….the bracelet guided them inside the cave. There was a huge skeleton, it was the monster's.

The bracelet guided us to a huge door. We had to open the door just like the bracelet guided us to.

We kicked hard on the door again and again and it finally opened.

It was full of spider webs and we could see the book of haunted it was on top of a million rocks!!

We had to kick the rocks, we kicked the rocks and the bracelet fell of our hand and broke.
Not even one rock broke! Our legs were bleeding rocks were stuck in them, we still tried and tried finally 3 rocks were left and we had to climb on them

We did it!! We got the book of haunted!!

But then suddenly the skeleton was alive!!! It caught Ella.

‘Leave her’ Elena shouted.

‘If I leave her then you have to die!!’ the skeleton of the monster shouted.

Elena ran, she stood motionless on the edge of the cliff.

She was willing to die to save her sister’s life!

Ella kicked the skeleton in the face and ran; she held Elena’s hand and pulled her. The skeleton was coming nearer and nearer to Ella. Elena pushed Ella’s hand away and jumped into the blood river the skeleton turned into ashes.

‘NOOOO!!!ELENA!!’ Ella shouted

----The end----




   









Comments

  1. Nice one keep it up... All the best hoping for more stories from you.....

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  2. Your perseverance will help you succeed, way to go Vidhi keep rocking!!!!

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  3. Awesome beta....Let me spread this among my friend circle and office group.

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  4. Excellent Job Vidhi. Allah bless you to do so on.

    Congratulations Priyajit you as well.

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  5. Wowww..Nice Story Vidhi...keep it up..

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  6. It's simply Awesome and all the best

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  7. Excellent .....
    Looking forward for more such stories from you.

    Wish you all the best

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    1. thank you!!for sure more stories coming ur way!

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  8. Very nice, good thought process. Keep up the good work. Keep shining, looking for more such stories. All the best.

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  9. Impressive write up Vidhi....way to go!!

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  10. Very creative Vidhi . Well articulated. Keep writing and shining ! Kudos

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  11. Such a wonderfully spun story! Totally rocking it Vidhi��.
    Keep up the good work.��

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  12. Beautifully penned. Keep writing more. Great storyline.

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  13. Its awesome Vidhi. looking forward for many more stories.

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  14. Hey Vidhi! I love fairy tales and like the way the story was going. I want to know what happened to Elena. Do write more. Good writing, keep at it. All the best!

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    1. it's quite unfortunate but Elena dies at the end...

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  15. Hi Vidhi - I liked both the characters from your story, Ella & Elena, they are brave girls. Good storyline. Keep writing more. All the Best !!

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  16. Wonderful story..Looking forward for more such stories. Best of luck!!

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    1. thank you! more stories will be comimg ur way!

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  18. Very Nice Vidhi. I felt as if I was watching Frozen 2 like movie. I could see the story characters right in front of my eyes. Please keep on writing & continue sharing your work! Keep it up Vidhi!

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  19. Nice story Vidhi.Keep it up ����

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  20. Excellent work around..Nice Story Vidhi.
    Many Congratulations...!!!

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  21. it was an intresting story nice work

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  22. Amazing book Vidhi. Definitely loved it. Will spread word to everyon

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  23. the most amazing stories ever vidhi!!!!!!!!!!! i love ur stories and also i will also be ur biggest fan FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Aww.. Thank you so much! This means a lot to me :D

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  24. BY THE WAY the unknown person is me

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