An icy death
I never imagined that I would get to live my dream. A dream I aimed for, growing up, watching movies where students would live their best life in college. I wanted to be like those main characters, living a life with their roommates, having friends to run the hallways with and feeling excited for what comes next. I am eternally grateful to have lived my dream. I am grateful to have gotten a taste of the dorm life before my college experience through this intensive but rewarding youth leadership conference. 14th July. The packing that I had weeks to do was done in one day or specifically in a few hours before we had to leave. At around 1:30, we arrived at Texas Wesleyan University. It took us a few minutes to navigate to the registration desk, but then we made it. My parents helped me unpack and dropped me off at the dorm. I waited there for my roommate. Honestly, I was anxious to see who my roommate for 5 days would be because no matter how anyone else at the conference was, ...
This is amazing Vidhi. The way you write, it’s perfect!
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DeleteThis poem is much deeper than it appears! Very impressive for a teenager! Keep it up Vidhi!
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DeleteYou are an amazing writer and each word of this poem is deep. Keep going!
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DeleteI loveeee the poem and the writing elements u used in it! I also love the way it shows winter in general in a different lighting which I find interesting and intriguing! Can’t wait for more! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you! I really appreciate it :)
DeleteNo words to say Vidhi.
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DeleteWow beautiful poem VD! You wrote about something so simple but elaborated it beautifully. Feel bad for the fish tho π₯²
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Thank you! :D And I feel bad for the fish too but it's the natural cycle of life :((
DeleteIt is a very beautiful poem with so much depth. I loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Love you my cutie π§Ώπ§Ώ
ReplyDeleteWoah- this is so deep. This is an amazing peice :), I love the way you used this poem to convey something deeper than the surface. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThat's such a good poem, loved it, it can be in an English textbook :) jk.
ReplyDeleteUr doing amazing vd
I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU AGAINN.... AND I DIDN'T THINK THAT WOULD BE POSSIBLEEE...I LOVED IT SOO MUCH AND I MISS U LIKE CRAZYYππππ
ReplyDeletei am inspired by u.... teach me ur ways... ily (btw its a really good poem, just a sad story for the fish)
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS AMAZING BABY GIRL!!! π₯°π₯°πkeep writing more like this
ReplyDeleteAyyyyy that’s so goodddd
ReplyDeleteSuch a captivating piece with such vivid imagery. The way fragility and tension have been woven together is so beautiful. Please never stop writing VD <3
ReplyDeleteYou just keep getting better and better Vidhi! Love this poem.
ReplyDeletevidhi this is so beautiful!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's just soo wow Vidhi!! π₯
ReplyDeleteYou are an Amazing poet!! π
Keep writing!
- Gargi
Woah! This is so melancholy and beautiful. You definitely have a way with words Vidhi. I am looking forward for more poems from you!
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